tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post6653531899953319157..comments2016-03-11T02:52:15.099-08:00Comments on Just Because: I Need a Drink...Jackie Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04433891112924290836noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post-70848128779798393612016-03-03T09:22:02.750-08:002016-03-03T09:22:02.750-08:00Your writing reminds me of Dr. Seuss. I felt the q...Your writing reminds me of Dr. Seuss. I felt the quick pace of excitement in the beginning and the warm comfy slow down. I really enjoyed reading this part! A special event calls for that certain something. "Something to add spice to the slice. This treat for the tongue doesn’t shout. It murmurs...write, mull, read, contemplate" I read it several times silently and then aloud...I like it's rhythm.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519735949398226815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post-33084189903748432562016-03-02T19:14:30.280-08:002016-03-02T19:14:30.280-08:00I love the "spice to the slice" line! A...I love the "spice to the slice" line! And the contrast between the short sentences of summer at the start and the lingering sentences that swirl and mull their way to your hot cocoa induced slice create a great pace to your piece.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18242789002327147206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post-49751804141825328862016-03-02T18:00:43.153-08:002016-03-02T18:00:43.153-08:00Here's to adding "spice to the slice!&quo...Here's to adding "spice to the slice!" Congrats on day 2! Cheers!Leigh Anne Eckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558611848583070310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post-45996575583026036962016-03-02T16:11:58.375-08:002016-03-02T16:11:58.375-08:00Treat!Treat!Jackie Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04433891112924290836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1024084563380617750.post-64217533449229565152016-03-02T16:02:17.519-08:002016-03-02T16:02:17.519-08:00Love the swirls among the thoughts. Going to get ...Love the swirls among the thoughts. Going to get a Dove chocolate now.Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18021256117579217710noreply@blogger.com